i like the fonts you used really works well with the words. nioce flow and contrast. only comment that i have is that try to take up more negative space.
I agree that there is a lot of negative space. Maybe you could spread out the words more to fill in space. Also making "serious" bigger would give it more character and also fill in negative space.But besides that i love all of the creativity you used in every word. Each word fully represents what its meaning is. Great job!
I'm not really sure if there is any particular visual flow in this piece. There is a vocal point which is fun but then i dont know where my eye should go next...other thn that greaat job
Your art work has good proportion. The wword fun is huge and the word childish is much smaller.
ReplyDeleteI love all the colors and fonts! It makes it look really fun! There's a lot of blank space though. But still, props! :)
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ReplyDeletei like the fonts you used really works well with the words. nioce flow and contrast. only comment that i have is that try to take up more negative space.
ReplyDeleteI agree that there is a lot of negative space. Maybe you could spread out the words more to fill in space. Also making "serious" bigger would give it more character and also fill in negative space.But besides that i love all of the creativity you used in every word. Each word fully represents what its meaning is. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI'm not really sure if there is any particular visual flow in this piece. There is a vocal point which is fun but then i dont know where my eye should go next...other thn that greaat job
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